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Playing sports is really good for children.

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2) A main idea: playing sports is beneficial for children

Now that we know what a strong thesis statement is, we can begin to craft one of our own. Most effective thesis statements often answer these three questions:

Notice that I also now have the three major elements of a thesis statement:

Achieving such a feat can be a challenge and it’s easy to see why. Most students will end up revising their theses once or twice throughout the writing process. You should constantly be revising and editing your work to make sure it is at its best, but it’s important to have that foundation of a good thesis.

Now let's revise our working thesis into a stronger claim.

3) Support or Evidence: better cooperation, better coordination, and better overall health.

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2. A good thesis asserts one main idea. Many essays get into trouble because the writer tries to explain two different large issues in one essay. Pick one main idea and explain it in convincing detail.

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"I believe that America's cultural identity can be defined by art, literature, and film."

There are no sentences which you can learn for a high score. Any sentences you learn to put in your essay will lower your score. You should start by paraphrasing the statement given – that’s all. Then add your thesis statement and your introduction is complete. See this page:

Here is a list of questions to help determine the strength of your thesis statement. After revising the working thesis into a more effective statement, ask yourself the following:

"I believe that America's cultural identity can be defined by art, literature, music, and film."
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  • Number 2 is the best introduction.

    1) A subject: playing sports

  • "Art, literature, and film define America's cultural identity."

    Thesis Statement

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Notice how this topic is pared down to a workable size:

Look at the feedback when you have decided.

Common Problems

First, look through list of common mistakes made when writing thesis statements.

To summarise, the major errors tend to be that:-

If the essay is argumentative, be assertive!!

Exercise 1

Now rewrite each of the thesis statements below, turning each into an effective thesis statement for a 2-3 page essay.

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To summarise again, your thesis statements should:-Your thesis statement may well also:-
Examples of Good Thesis Statements

Look at the following thesis statements.

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You must think carefully about what would be an appropriate topic for an essay of this length - be careful not to choose a topic that is either too broad or too narrow.

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